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Cutex Group: Member - Total Posts: 3
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Need editing/translation advice/criticism for Girls Und Panzer 4koma
Posted on: 03/29/17 02:32PM
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A rough translation:
ボゴボゴアリスちゃん
Bogobogo Alice-chan
宴会中
During the party
なんか盛り上 がらねーな!
This party isn’t lively enough!
ちびっ子!
Little girl!
漫才やつ!
Comedy duo!
ー緒に漫才するで!!
Let’s do a comedy act!!

やだ
No chance!
き、ぱり
(Need help on this one)
なんでやねんっ!!
What nonsense!!!
あ~よしよし
Ah how nice
後でこいつ殺しとこますんで!!
I’ll kill you later!!

I would appreciate criticism and corrections for my translation. It's my first time translating a comedy strip, I feel a bit out of my depth.


jedi1357 Group: Moderator - Total Posts: 2921
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Posted on: 03/29/17 04:46PM
Leaving that in the comments is fine. You didn't have to make a forum topic about it.

Edit: Added translation from Danbooru. danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2674435

You can use iqdb.org/ so see if Danbooru already has a translation for a post.

Cutex Group: Member - Total Posts: 3
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Posted on: 03/29/17 09:17PM
jedi1357 said:
Leaving that in the comments is fine. You didn't have to make a forum topic about it.

Edit: Added translation from Danbooru. danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2674435

You can use iqdb.org/ so see if Danbooru already has a translation for a post.

Thank you for informing me. I'll keep a tab on Danbooru to see if there is already a translation. Again, thank you for your patience.

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